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Re: The Progeny: Chapter 7
Hola Gangamash! I'm back for a shorter review. I won't go too in depth with the story line because I felt like we just got tense when I made suggestions. ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 6
Hey MissGangamash! Sorry for such a long wait. I'm just going to make some quick comments and do the whole shebang for the next chapter. :) This is a fantastic ...
Oct 11, 2014 -
Re: Anomaly: Chapter 1.1
Heyyyyy beautiful! Here as promised. *bows* I'm so excited that you posted this! I'm going to go through this with a fine-tooth comb, so please bear with me. I also ...
Oct 10, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 5 (Revised)
Heyo, my favorite vampire-writer friend. (I don't have many of those XD) Here for another review! Shorter this time, I think. Also, sorry about doing nitpicks first, but I like ...
Sep 13, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny : Chapter 4
Hey there, MissGangamash! I realized that I've only left you one review, and I am really sorry for that. I have been faithfully following your story, and am guilty of ...
Sep 12, 2014 -
Re: 'A Child Shall Lead Them,' Short Story
Hey there! Night here for a short review. I understand that this is older, but it's never too late to go back, right? Sooooo this is an interesting idea, I'll ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Moonshine
Hey there, horserider! Nightcrawler here to review this piece! Alright, so this is a very interesting piece. It would be a remarkable story even if it was fiction, but the ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Titanium
Hey there, wisegirl22! Here to review, like you asked! :) If you have other review suggestions, I will gladly take them. I wasn't sure what you had in mind. :) ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: The Progeny: Chapter 3
Hey Gangamash! Happy review day! Also, sorry about weird glitchy blank thing below. I dunno what happened. XD Wow. This chapter was the best by far. You hooked me at ...
Aug 31, 2014 -
Re: Daughter of the living God
Hey there, kbmcgregor3! First, thank you for the mention. That was very kind. ^-^ Second, what an awesome work! I loved the imagery you put to play here. It makes ...
Aug 13, 2014 -
Re: God, Kill me now
Hey Pinkie. Before I go on to review, I want to make sure you are okay. Are you really feeling suicidal? I know high school sucks a lot sometimes, and ...
Aug 5, 2014 -
Re: I am Kind.
Hello methrir123! Night, here to review this lovely work! Thank you. Thank you. Finally , a piece that isn't depressing, political, or boring. Just plain, questioning innocence. I really enjoy ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: .
Don't leave. Your works made me laugh, and the haters here will just get more arrogant if you do! What they said against your works doesn't matter, because if you ...
Aug 2, 2014 -
Re: Haunting Shadows
Hey Traunt! As per usual, it seems that you have succeeded in giving me nightmares and ruining my sanity created yet another lovely tail. Tale. Sorry. XD One thing I ...
Jul 21, 2014 -
Re: My name is Kelly-Marie and I'm a murderer
Congrats on featured, lovely! Goodness are you trying to kill me like what even that was horrible but beautiful because you made it so GOOD for it to be DREADFUL ...
Jul 21, 2014
