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Re: Letters from the General
You're right. I'm drunk!!!!!!!!!!!!! :roll: 8) :( :o :P :P :P :P :P :twisted: hehehehehehehehehehehrehehehehehehrheheheheh.
Oct 10, 2007 -
Re: All We Know
I don't know... You have a good idea, but it is not good enough. JOE Hey, you listen here. Tell your dad what they did to you. He already knows ...
Oct 10, 2007 -
Re: The Frontier
I think you have something going on, but it is a bit confusing. I mean, here you say they need to escape and then the food supply and then the ...
Oct 10, 2007 -
Re: Who Art Thou
I'm studiyng Shakespear next year so I better get use to this. Even though I am not that good to understanding it, but ah well. It is either shakespear or ...
Oct 10, 2007 -
Re: Mephisto Waltz
I really liked it. It was something different from all the other poetry. It is a beautiful dance and that is what really intrigued me in the first place. :) ...
Oct 9, 2007 -
Re: Who you are
It is really good. I can make my own rythym in my head and that is good! :wink: You should make more verse or let me put it this way. ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Literature Train
I like it, and you can feel the flow, but just barely. Sparks and flames will ignite, Add a load to my fright; I'll regret it. I really like this ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Conversations With a Darker Self 2
I don't know. This wasn't your best, but I have to say, I love the imagery. Your lies are nothing to me. Your heart is nothing to me. I am ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Missing in Action
I love the MIA! Brilliant! You know your music, I would like that guitar chords so that I get an idea of the rythym and sound and flow you know. ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: Concequences of Betrayal
I get the idea and I like it, but you need to work on your flow. The tears slide in rivers down my face – A flushed whore.The blade was ...
Oct 8, 2007 -
Re: SABLE
Damn I loved this poem! It is so beautiful. :cry: Muddy colored fur gleaming in the light, Your eyes like stars, fallen from night. Tail happily pulsing as I walk ...
Oct 7, 2007 -
Re: corresponding
Right... It made me a bit confused. I think I know what you were trying to say. I am the curl of phrase the breath in the wire. A bandaid; ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: When it Happens
It was all right. There is no rythym in this poem. When it Happens It only takes one thing. One thing to make happy. One thing to make me sad. ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: Teardrops fall to soak my sholulders
I think it was good. Rupert. Are you reflecting Ron in harry Pottor? A single drop of moisture Rolls down my cheek And falls down To die on my shoulder. ...
Sep 29, 2007 -
Re: A Child's nightmare
It is freakashly cool. These monsters in my house under the blouse hidden on my floor next to my bed. Reach to get me I know it can't be THere ...
Sep 28, 2007
