Someguy

I don't know. I like the idea, but I didn't feel your emotions. It was just like everyday where we walk on things we didn't know was there. If that ...

Okay. I like it. Very powerful. The tempo was a bit dodgy, but that's okay. Arrogance blooms with much to spare As I stand before the crooked lair Of mortal ...

I like it. Very nice rhyming in some places and the tempo was good. I just didn't feel it, if you know what I mean. If my lips weren’t cool ...

Very cool poem. I like it. You have creative mind and you used it 100% At five I knew who Marilyn Monroe was, the turquoise fifties number, two sizes too ...

Okay... Honestly- This was not good. It was dull and failed to achieve its purpose, which is to unleash the persons imagination and emotion. This definitely needs a lot of ...

*No comment* I'll be very honest. First of all. " i " should be " I " Do not let this be your downfall... ALWAYS START WITH A CAPITAL LETTER! ...

This is more like a prologue, really. The first sentence wasn't good and it change the idea of what is to come. At first I thought it was a night ...

I'm not sure. It isn't good for me. No offense. I don't like it at all. It is too sloppy and maybe it will make a good song. I just ...

Okay... This is like a Gothic version of a hippy song. lol Who is willing to give a fatherly role, on a walk to the beauty way. (Beauty way?!? Please ...

Definitely Narrative poem. Okay I see the story...I think. Sorry. I failed to see what you tried to tell me. It is either I'm a retard or it isn't a ...

I have to agree with Jiggity. It was dull and my imagination didn't even switch on. You did too many errors. This poem is as if you just wrote it ...

Okay. I don't know... Some people are torn to pieces By a break up or a unshared love Some people cry their hearts out And some scream and pout The ...

Okay. Very nice poem. I really enjoyed it. Little girl so lost Sunken so low In the questionable things she’s done This is very interesting. I'm not sure about this. ...

This was very short. It really needs more. You explained those 4 lines, but it wasn't enough. For the span of a lifetime things may last or for this precious ...

I'm back! Let us start. It is one of your better poems. You have a few parts which I find very cliche and that is NOT what you want in ...