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Very nice, I loved it... Mostly because I think I said something along those lines to one of my friends who was trying to form a relationship with my crush ...

Although I wouldn't say it was perfect, it could do with some grammer checks, I thought it was interesting and even though some people here wouldn't have any idea why ...

It was not wordy, but fantastically expressed. I loved the imagery of the lines: "You never did what I lit you for But still today I am again in your ...

I thinkI shall worship you, because this poem left me awe-struck. Beautifully written, my favourite lines were "The love-moon waxes and the same way, It will wane! Its just strange ...

The ending doesn't seem to keep up with the same momentum of the beginning of the poem, but i think that's perfect with the poem, considering the last line and ...

I liked what you were trying to portray, I thought it was interesting, but it seemed a little... jumbled maybe? I didn't understand it too well the first time I ...

Although you didn't ourtright use cliches, I felt a lot of what you said had been said before too many times in different ways. It was much too abstract and ...

A brain fart is a moment when you don't understand or remember something that is obvious and easy and you would have at any other given time. It's like your ...

I feel you, I understand where you're coming from. I liked it. By the way, have you ever read "Sinners in the Hands of An Angry God?" It's a sermon ...

It was very beautiful, and I can relate to it so well. I love how you associated dancing with the beginnings of a relationship and the possibilities of it. You ...

VERY INTERESTING TOPIC!!!! I love the idea of capturing Autumn in a jar, I love love love love love it!!!! Although I think this idea would have been better expressed ...

You look deep in my eyes, And still can't see my pain. You say you need me for strength, And everything will be okay someday. I know you say you ...

I completely agree with you on the poem. I say fuck 'em too, mornings do suck, especially tuesday mornings. mondays suck cause it's the firs tof the week after two ...

At first glance, this is an awesome poem, but when you analyze it, you see that a lot of the lines are overdone and not original. I don't like how ...

I grabbed the razor in my hand, Slid it slowly across my wrist. Blood slid down my arm, As I studied it with bliss . Perhaps a different word, not ...