Young Writers Society

That's exactly why I chose that imagery. I also used "Prada on concrete" because it's the comparison of something lovely and something urbanised and grimy.



Is that pretentious?

I knew what she was when I saw the fishnet tights. In my mind I have the stereotypical image of prostitutes wearing fishnet ho's.

A brain fart is a moment when you don't understand or remember something that is obvious and easy and you would have at any other given time. It's like your brain just shut down for a moment.

And I really wouldn't have known she was a prostitute had you not said it. Now it's a bit clearer.

I wouldn't have known that if you hadn't said so. It's nice to have a hidden meaning but maybe you could give the reader a few more hints to help them get it?

And what's a brain fart?

Ok she is a prostitute.

I don't know, I can't really say I fully understood it. I suppose I'm going through a brain fart.

I don't know... I like your other poem better. This doesn't really have much vivid imagery. It seems more of "you can't love me, so bye!" sort of poem. To make it seem better, try to put a teeny bit more description into why this poem came out of you in the first place.