Sohini

i like both but HP is better. TLOTR doesn't seem very friendly.though THE HOBBIT was aimed at kids and i loved it. HP 5TH Wasn't very good but the rest ...

great it's for all ages i think. i do hope your wishes (and mine could be true).

wow!!! I SEEM TO HAVE AN EVEN WORSE RHYMING SENSE. CHECK MY OTHER POEMS-OUR OUTLANDISH HEROES and WITCH( in dramatic section).tell me what u think.

i take all of your advice and will try to rhyme better and write in free verse thank u for pointing out my flaws.

THIS WAS GREAT AND YOU ARE QUITE A WONDERFUL WRITER. :wink:

where the separate lines??this would be nice if u would break the loong sentence ino small ones. try it!!

VERY EXPRESSIVE AND REALLY GOOD. THE ONES WHO BOMBED LONDON SHOULD READ THIS.

THANKS FOR YOUR REVIEW. I meant to use the ADJECTIVE ‘gay’, which by THE OXFORD DICTIONARY means: light-hearted; cheerful or brightly colored. Why go for the offensive meaning which is ...

I think u should work a bit more on the rhymes.

SORRY, but it would be better if u could be more expressive. i didn't get the theme of this poem. maybe it's too small. :?

is this a narrative poem? it sounds nice and gives a nice message about humiliating others.

i did notice the rhyming and i like it . loved the third stanza. :)