Soccer23

First off, this is definitely something worth working on. I have a few minor suggestions & questions, but other than that, this is great. I hope my ugly list format ...

First off, you are amazing, and the lyrics are super impressive and poetic. I love that, and I’m going to try a heart eyes emoji for this…😍😍😍..ummm…I hope that worked ...

hi again! This is me going on a look-at-art binge! I really like the unique take and opinion you have on love. One thing, very minor. Where you say: unfortunately ...

Like the name! Sounds intriguing! Good story! Has a nice cliffhanger ending, which leaves me wondering what the next chapter will bring. It's a great page-turner, (okay, not literally,) and ...

Hi LUNARGIRL ! This is a great poem! I could go on and on about how great it is, but that's your teacher's job ;) I'm just going to give ...

Hi Elinor! This is really interesting, wouldn't be surprised if you said it was based off of cinderella, I hope you write a sequel, telling what happens in the castle, ...

Hi @uwubamba! This is really nice, and powerful, and since my ELA teacher was going on and on about foreshadowing, I think this uses that technique very nicely. I like ...

Hey MoonIris! This is I guess going to be more of a comment, but I saw that it's been in the green room for quite a while, and only because ...

Ok, so I maybe wasn’t expecting this, but it’s actually really good. I’ve never been good at haikus, but I know a good one when I see it and this ...

Thanks for the introduction!! here's mine: I'm totally new, joined yesterday, But ive done a few blog entries, and ive reviewed a little already! I play soccer 6 days a ...

Nice Job! I like how you went into detail about how the disinfectant felt on your cut, and it was definitely powerful! Question:Did you actually have to have your foot ...

Great job! I think that that poem is very relatable to people born into fame. You rhymed it very well, a tad repetitive, which was good. I will say, this ...

OMG YOU DID THIS IN TWENTY MINUTES!!! Bro do you do out of school art or something? That is crazy!!! Keep posting, and if I ever have a shading assignment ...

I know this is quite a short review, but I hope it's to-the-point. This sounds so intriguing, I haven't read the other ones, but i'm about to, thanks to this ...