so basically i forgot to do this for art class and then my teacher called me out because i was the only one who didn’t turn it in. then i cried for a minute and got to work.
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Hi there! Niteowl here to leave a quick review.
First off, I hope you got credit for turning in that assignment! I know I've been guilty of doing assignments as the teacher was coming to collect them, though I know there's no way I'd be able to do this in 20 minutes.
Secondly, this is overall well done. The shading is good and the shapes are mostly well-defined, especially the pyramid on top of the prism. The one I think is iffy is the shape behind the pyramid on top of the prism. I'm not sure if it's meant to be rectangular or rounded-the shadow looks more rounded than the others but the shape itself is more rectangular. If you need to revise this, I would try to define it more clearly. I'm also a little confused by the cube in the top right that appears to be floating. Perhaps that was part of the assignment (to make it look like it's floating in 3-D space) but on the face of it it seems odd.
This is a bit nitpicky, but it seems like the shadow behind the prism on the right is going a different direction than the others, like it's more east-to-west than southeast-to-northwest (not sure if that makes sense but it's the best way I can describe it).
Overall, this is well done and better than I could do, especially in just 20 minutes. Keep drawing!
hi, thanks for reviewing! i totally agree with everything that you said after looking at the spots you pointed out. this is definitely not my best, and i will come back to this review if i need to revise! have a lovely day.
hi, thanks for reviewing! i totally agree with everything that you said after looking at the spots you pointed out. this is definitely not my best, and i will come back to this review if i need to revise! have a lovely day.
OMG YOU DID THIS IN TWENTY MINUTES!!! Bro do you do out of school art or something? That is crazy!!! Keep posting, and if I ever have a shading assignment or something, if you would, i'll shoot you a message on the YWS platform, and i'd really appreciate if you could give me some pointers; i had to draw a sphere once last year and i was coloring and erasing for hours 😂😂😂😂😂 oh and cool ur using this as a drawing platform, didn't think of that, I got here yesterday, and i think it's pretty cool so far....
GREAT JOB KEEP DRAWING
oh my gosh thank you!!!! i%u2019m actually just in high school, but i%u2019ve been to a lot of art classes through scholarships and stuff, so i%u2019ve had a lot of teaching. and of course feel free to PM me anytime for help, i%u2019ll try my best!
Thanks so much!
"i've been to a lot of art classes through scholarships and stuff, so i've had a lot of teaching"
Aha! You got a million art scholarships! Not very surprised %uD83D%uDE04
yeah i%u2019ve gotten a few throughout the years. they%u2019re really helpful, so i%u2019ve worked hard to get them!
The shading and the shadows
Honestly, this is better than one my art teacher made in ten hours. (And she only did two objects!)
Oh.my.god. This is so freaking cool! Dude how'd you get that done in just 20 minutes?? AGH WOW I hope you submitted this now and got graded good XD
ahahaha thanks! i hope i get a good grade too.
You're welcome! Let's hope together, my friend