Snowery

Hey! Thanks so much for reviewimg my work! It really means a lot and your review isn't odd at all, just really cool 8)

Hey Peanut! Thanks a lot for your review! I'm really glad you liked this. :)

Hey SubtleSanity!! Thanks for your review!! :) Believe me when I say with time and practice you can achieve anything with words. Just keep practicing and believe in yourself. :) ...

Hi thanks so much for your review. :) I'm glad the story had it's intended effect. Ummm.. I've been writing since I was nine so quite a long time. Thanks ...

Hi John!! Thank you for your review!! You were very sweet :) Thank you for pointing out my mistakes I've gone and adjusted them. Yes I agree lace is a ...

Hey Laure!! Thanks so much for reviewing this, it means alot. I'm really glad that it wasn't what you had expected because I was scared it might be predictable. I ...

No worries!! I usually feel if it's something important than do an author's note but otherwise just let them talk it out :) Happy writing :)

Hey Joe!! Thanks so much for sticking with me on tis story. I know this chapter wasn't great, I was rushed and battling the dreaded writer's block. I didn't really ...

Hey Joey!! Thanks again for ANOTHER great review. I know the povs are confusing, especially when reading online rather than as a proper book. Lia and Tallon are my main ...

Hey joe!! Thanks again for another awesome review. You have no idea how much I appreciate all your editing, sometimes I go over it a million times and never spot ...

Coolies :)

Hi!!! Thank you sooo much for reviewing my piece!! I was really nervous posting this, poems are usually not my thing but I'm trying too get there. Your review was ...

Hey joebot!! Thanks again for your detailed review. I'll start by clearing up the albino thing. Alitha Marianna Darr is Tallon's sister and daughter of the Averence. The previous chapter ...

Hey joebot! Thanks for reviewing my chapter! I love how you review are so in depth. You're right I have a problem with dialogue punctuation, I tend to get confused ...

Hey joebot!! Thanks sooo much for responding to my request and reviewing my story! I know that this one needs a lot of work. It does need a bit more ...