Snowery

Hey Anonymous!! Silver here!! :) Wow, this is really good. You had me from the get go and never lost me from there. Your grammar and spelling was perfect. Your ...

Hi!! Silver here!! I really liked this!! Very well written. Great descriptions. Great dialogue and great characters!! It flowed really well and I found it easy to read. Your grammar ...

Hey AmethystNight!! Silver here!! :) I really liked this!! You have a really interesting plot here. I enjoyed reading this. I think you really did the whole "show, don't tell" ...

Hey D4RKR4VEN!! Silver here!! :) I love this! :) I read this chapter on its own, I have no idea what the plot is or what's happened but that really ...

Hey AnnaBlue!! Silver here!! :) :) This story didn't grab my attention and didn't really get more interesting as it went on. However I really like how you have used ...

Hey rishabh!! Silver here to review!! Firstly I noticed that there was no clear introduction? Your beginning was good but it sort of morphed with the rest. There should always ...

Hey CrystalPony21!! Its Silver here!! So lets get reviewing!! The beginning: I personally think that it would have been far more interesting if you had started in the middle of ...

Hey!! Silver here to review!! :) I found your story interesting and intriguing. Most of it was written well but as Supermeggs12 mentioned some of your sentences were choppy. Also ...

Hi sarahnsnow!! Silver here!! Haha kind of like Silvernist from your story. I really like your story. It has an interesting plot and I like how she's being forced to ...

Hey RLK! Silver here!! :) I LOVED THIS!!! It's one of the best things that I've read so far!! you captured Moses' addiction perfectly!! Your description was AMAZING. I could ...

Hey Neverland! Silver here! I really enjoyed this! It's different to what I've read before. Falling stars is a verey interesting idea and I oove the way you discribed them ...

Hey Omi1! Silver here! Your story has alot of potential. I can feel the escence of a really interesting world here. As dD4RKR4VEN mentioned though the baby killing reminds me ...

Hey dbrick! Silver here! I really liked this. It had a nice flow and was well written. The main problem I had was just the formatting but you've already mentioned ...

Hey Mary97! Silver here! I have to say that your ending left me really frustrated! I want to know what Brianne is now! :( You have a great writing style ...

Hey EscapeToNeverland! Silver here. I really liked this. It was nice to read and left me wanting more. I really liked the memories and the strong friendship that they shared. ...