Snowery

Hey!! Silver here to review your story!!! :) I really liked this. It really took me back to my childhood days. Like Lucrezia I really connected with this character because ...

Hey SARAHJO, Silver here to review your piece!! :) :) As usual I really liked what you wrote apart from the few things that I mention below you grammar, spelling ...

Hey timmyjake!! Silver here to review your introduction! First of all congratulations on such a well written piece! It was really good. No grammar or spelling problems and your structure ...

Hi SARAHJO! It's Silver here to review your chapter. :) :) You called this chapter boring but I really liked this! I like how you wanted us to get to ...

Hey Niraco!! Silver here to review your piece! I don't usually read or review science fiction but I'll do my best. Your gramma, spelling and structure looks great so I'll ...

Hey readingisthekey!! Silver hereto review your story! :) I liked how you started the story: "Looking at her seemed wrong" this really grabbed my attention straight away. I also like ...

Hey SARAHJO!! Silver here to review for you!! :) :) First of all I have to say that I've really enjoyed what I've been reading so far. This chapter especially ...

Hey Neverland!! Your buddy Silver here to review. :) :) This is better than the last one even though it does still need a lot of work. I'm glad that ...

Hey!! It's Silver here to review your piece!! :) I have to say that I love your concept. I'm really interested to see where this story will go and to ...

Hey TheNeoAceofAll! Silver here to review your piece. :) I like how you've started with pages from a textbook, quite a few fantasy stories start like that. I like you ...

Hey Jibber!! Silver here!! I really liked this a lot!! For a piece done by six people it flows amazingly well. There's no grammar or spelling problems. I felt that ...

Hey Neveland!! Silver here!! I'm going to start off by saying that I'm actually going to have to agree with most if not all of what Ball said below. Title: ...

Hey!! Silver here to review your piece!! :) What I liked about your story was that it was written, there were no grammar, spelling or structural mistakes. This makes it ...

Hey TiffanyHe!! Silver here to review your piece! :) Since Questio and Cirute have mainly reviewed your gramma, I'll have a go at your content. First of all, I know ...

Hey brielle! Silver here to review your story! :) I have to say that I really liked your beginning. I liked the way you started with her daydreaming followed by ...