SnowGhost

Thanks so much for the review. Yeah it's from the perspective of a Gargoyle (aka conventionally less attractive people) who's saddened by the idea that, despite his fight to protect ...

These poems are so charming and sweet, and brought a smile to my face. :) My favorite one is Alpaca. Have you every considered making a Zine of your poems? ...

This is a great poem hiraeth! I both really like the fromatting and font style you chose, as well as the poetically repetitive style of the poem. I especially love ...

Glad you liked it. And you're not being nit-picky at all, those are very helpful tips! In fact ima edit it right now. Thank you so much, I appreciate the ...

Thanks for the awesome advice! I'll definitely fix those two things you mentioned :)

Man this was a great read! The ending was stellar. :)

Haha I love this! XD And I can definitely see how it was Sherlock Holmes inspired. Very enjoyable read, it was very well written. :D

This is such a cool poem. :) The rhythm and rhyming reads so smoothly--thumbs up.

Like seriously, thanks so much

Thank you so much for the review. And I REALLY appreciate your input on the whole arrow thing. Like I know next to nothing about that and when I tried ...

Oh and also, you're right, the woman should be a little more scared. But part of the reason why I didn't write her freaking out is because her character is ...

Thanks for the review, I really appreciate it! And you're definitely right about adding more details about the river. XD

Well I'm just scared of over detailing because I've seen a lot of people make that mistake, and when I try to avoid it, I sometimes end up with not ...

Awesome

Why of course! I look forward to reading your future work :)