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Hello, smile123! :) I love the emotion that you clearly put into this, and it is both easy to relate to and emotion-invoking. A few critiques that I have: being ...

Oh, I just love this. Let’s get started, shall we? I adore the extensive descriptions in the beginning. Sometimes too many small details can be overwhelming and seem like mere ...

This piece resonated such strong feelings within me, and it takes a skilled poet to be able evoke such emotion from the reader. The criticisms you described are such a ...

This is beautiful. Your writing has a wonderful fluidity to it, something I think is vital for poetry. The lines flow together wonderfully, and the message is extremely meaningful. I ...

Oh my goodness. This, my friend, is the type of writing that significantly lowers the positive feelings I have about my writing. Please, take that as a compliment. XD I ...

This is a really great start. You have a very nice writing style. I can't I'm "hooked" yet, so since this is the preface you could try to add a ...

I'm not sure if this is part of a longer story, or if it is standalone. Either way, I definitely enjoyed it! One thing I would suggest is to work ...

This is a really great start! The premise of your story definitely intrigues me, and I'll be eagerly awaiting more! Sometimes you lack correct grammar, such as forgotten commas and ...

Hello! :) Okay, first of all... I absolutely adore the vibe you created with this poem. The description in the very first stanza drew me in, and I am extremely ...

I really like this so far! Like others have said, I do think it moves a bit fast. I like how you used present tense because it made me feel ...