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Re: Beyond Words
Wow. Just wow. I dont know if you made that up or there is a special someone, but that has so much emotion and truth. I loved it deeply and ...
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Re: Talk to me
This is beautiful! i cant critic anything and im getring goosebumps. This was amazing. I loved it and i was attentive all the time. I might of missed something, but ...
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Re: What's for dinner, Eorzea?
I really liked it! It was different and honestly weird, good weird. I like this good weird. Im also confused, but happy confused, does this make sense? I hope it ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: Take it From Me
Thats was beautifull, perfect size. Not too long, not too short. I would try to end it differently, give the readers an ending that fits. Im no expert ( or ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: Mommy, why?
Wauw, my grandmother had an abortion and ahe told me she regretted it now. I think this was touching, but im not very good at criticizing poetry. Sorry. As far ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: Think Ch. 1
Hi... I think you have passion, but i would suggest some Changes. I want to help, so your not forced to do nay of this, okay? - change the description. ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: Weekly Wonders {1} *New Weekly Series! Read End Note!* EDITED
I really like this idea. I will defenitly follow so i can hear more, i would suggest Putting small tittles on the top of every fact or meme. But i ...
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Re: Broken Cliff
Dam....that was intense. Scary even. I could see every part Of the poem. I loved the shortness and directness. You don't beat around the bush, you just tell us. Every ...
May 11, 2015 -
Re: The Last Goodbye
That was so beautiful! It really catched me. Drifted me away. I loved the sentence" sometimes its good to close a chapter of our life-just so long as we don't ...
May 11, 2015
