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  • Poetry » Romantic, Romantic Re: Beyond Words

    Wow. Just wow. I dont know if you made that up or there is a special someone, but that has so much emotion and truth. I loved it deeply and ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Lyrics » Realistic, Dramatic Re: Talk to me

    This is beautiful! i cant critic anything and im getring goosebumps. This was amazing. I loved it and i was attentive all the time. I might of missed something, but ...

    May 12, 2015
  • Poetry » Dramatic, Health Re: What's for dinner, Eorzea?

    I really liked it! It was different and honestly weird, good weird. I like this good weird. Im also confused, but happy confused, does this make sense? I hope it ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Take it From Me

    Thats was beautifull, perfect size. Not too long, not too short. I would try to end it differently, give the readers an ending that fits. Im no expert ( or ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: Mommy, why?

    Wauw, my grandmother had an abortion and ahe told me she regretted it now. I think this was touching, but im not very good at criticizing poetry. Sorry. As far ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Think Ch. 1

    Hi... I think you have passion, but i would suggest some Changes. I want to help, so your not forced to do nay of this, okay? - change the description. ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Other » Other, Other Re: Weekly Wonders {1} *New Weekly Series! Read End Note!* EDITED

    I really like this idea. I will defenitly follow so i can hear more, i would suggest Putting small tittles on the top of every fact or meme. But i ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, Romantic Re: Broken Cliff

    Dam....that was intense. Scary even. I could see every part Of the poem. I loved the shortness and directness. You don't beat around the bush, you just tell us. Every ...

    May 11, 2015
  • Poetry » General, General Re: The Last Goodbye

    That was so beautiful! It really catched me. Drifted me away. I loved the sentence" sometimes its good to close a chapter of our life-just so long as we don't ...

    May 11, 2015


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