Snoink

Aha! I have a little bit of time... First of all, since I haven't really seen you around, I'm Snoink! Welcome to YWS. If you like writing, you'll love it ...

This totally deserves to be the featured work... :roll:

She wanted to take her diary, change the plot around and sell it. So, while she was writing it, she didn't think, "Oh, I'm going to publish this diary." She ...

@ Bobo: There are actually quite a few parents like that. It's scary. @ Rivergirl: A debate about linguistics! XD I have to agree with you there. Smart means a ...

Hehe! Okay, in the original report, there was this photo of me smiling at the camera, and you can see my back. I pull my hair in a ponytail straight ...

Not "ok".... It should be "okay." And repeating may and does sell, but don't be a sell out. Write what comes to the heart. :)

Please... her poetry? Allah is far prettier to say than God or Jesus, so the constant repetition is actually nice -- rather rare, actually.

Oh, it should be "BESTTEST" by the way....

The story induces a very powerful emotion. It makes me want to scream and cry and rip my eyeballs out. Good luck...

Me??? Punish my characters? NEVER! I mean, in my story, one's a slave, one has a terminal disease, one gets his arm hacked off... Okay. Maybe you're right. But there ...

Something like that, yes! Why, you read my mind!

Oh, and also — I have a sneaking suspicion as to who the Supreme Evil Overlord Person will be... Hee hee. This is lovely. Singing quartet indeed. Hmmm... it depends. ...

Okay! When I look at chapters, I try to see how they blend with each other. For instance, with my own story, I read the chapters individuallly and then all ...

Next time don't just edit... post! Yeesh... Smaur's right. The demon is rather glitzy and stuff... therefore the name "Azure" is perfect! I can imagine looking like a magician of ...

The first stanza is a little strange. I would seperate out the people or give them more descriptions. Also, I would rather see the line "gossamer steel dreams" because it ...