Snoink

Wait- why is she trying to sell her baby? Who is she selling it to? This is so CREEPY!! :( Poor, poor baby. To a publisher, of course.

This is pretty. Edit it, if you must, but as it is, it's a lovely poem.

Awwww... so cute! This poem makes me want to snuggle it.

Hehe... ;)

Thanks for the trial by fire, guys. I really do appreciate it. :) I gave it a major overhaul and, while I am far from suggesting that it is free ...

I edited this a little, correcting the misspelling of straitjacket (I had written it as strait jacket). I also tweaked one paragraph, added a line of dialogue, and switched around ...

Hehe, your sister's boyfriend is funny. ^_^ Tell him that he must come up with another rhyme for clog so he can have another line. It'll make everything sound so ...

Snoink, you're going to have to explain this part to me: And about I have sex with random guys. Perhaps you meant "me having"? Oops, thanks. It's supposed to be ...

No updates for this one... the member was banned a long time ago. O_o ***Locked***

Ahhh! I've listened to this soundtrack twice now, and I love it! It's so grinding and soft and I love it! *snuggles* And it also gives me a sudden urge ...

***Moved to Other Poetry***

This should belong in the poetry forums. ^_^ ***Moved to Other Poetry***

Instead of indentation, we use spaces in between paragraphs.

My mom ate something with an open-faced English muffin, but it had teryaki sauce and pineapples and ham. But I don't like pineapples much, so I decided to come up ...

Well, you already say after the aligators "I exclaim, not constraining my emotions into words, but saying it with my mind." So I don't think you need anything more than ...