Snoink

the other's to hell Should be "others" since it's not possessive.

Letter is sent, this shall be locked. :) *Locked*

Okay! I am back! :D I didn't really do a good job last time (sorry about that!) so I'm just going to critique through the poem being a lot more ...

Please do not post anything that isn't yours! That isn't allowed on YWS. *LOCKED*

:O You took some of my elements for your story! I demand half the prize, if you win. XD (And bulbasaur wins any time of the day. Though, really, Spoink ...

Angel of Death>> That's a cool thought, actually! I had never thought of that. :) It does delve into light vs. darkness, but I never thought of it being morning ...

Ducati>> Haha, it was a pun! But I do have a holey sweater. I'm wearing it now. It's quite comfy! And I think this is the second poem it's been ...

Silver>> Exactly! :D ee cummings did something like that too. It was pretty awesome. See, ee cummings usually never writes anything capitalized, so when he wrote God capitalized, it was ...

*Locked*

Thanks for all your comments! I fixed a horrible typo, so it should be somewhat cleaner now...

Er... yeah! I'm back. I did the video, so hopefully that will help a lot. Basically, I read the poem and then commented a little bit about it... but not ...

Don't get confused now Snoink. You're not a lizard; just look at your avatar, it's a pig! Clearly, candy makes people believe themselves to be lizards... but mostly it makes ...

*Moved to Other Fiction*

*Moved to Dramatic Poetry*

*Moved to Dramatic Poetry*