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You still need to finish it. ;) *prods*

Hahaha, I wouldn't call it a failure! It was really interesting! It just seemed to shift in a way that I wasn't quite expecting, which made the story a little ...

The fanfic is actually based on something that Teague wrote, a story called Fragile Little Things. You can actually read the first chapter here, though you should note that it's ...

Well, it was posted in the poetry forums, to be completely fair. :) And it does deal with history! Look up "Menelaus." ;)

I did read your PM! I just didn't know how to respond. XD Anyway, I forgot to mention one thing (sorry)! It's a rhythm thing... Break me the sunset in ...

Moved to Short Stories!

Thanks for the replies! :D I'm looking to revise this, so it's really helpful! >> Jelly! I have told you how much I love you, haven't I? I'll see what ...

Still, I did put this in my anthology of geeky science and math related poetry. So yeah... might not be your best, but I love the love of science and ...

Eek! Definitely better! A couple more thoughts: - Describe Creepy Carl! What exactly makes him creepy? - Next, this does NOT seem like a college-kids story. Sorry. They seem more ...

*Moved to Romantic Novels*

*Moved to Romantic Novels*

Lol! No, it's okay. Really. :) Otherwise, I would have locked it. Thanks for all the comments, guys! I really appreciate them. :)

Hmm... well, to make it seem more romantic, make the girl come alive more! Right now, she's kind of quiet, but if she responded or fought back or be a ...

Completely under wraps :) most of the government doesn't even know they exist; only the scientists workin on the project and the top dogs Kind of like the Manhattan Project! ...

Woooooo! This is much better! Loooooove the cliffhanger at the end! Now it's like, "What the hecks happening?!" Much, much better! The only nitpick here is Roxy... I want to ...