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  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delirium - Chapter 3

    Mwhahaha! First! :D *gnaws on story* I liked Lydia's musing about whether she should join dinner or not. So, from this section, it's clear that she doesn't think she's mad... ...

    Jan 2, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Chickens, Fantasy Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Four, Flying the Coop

    BUT WAIT!!!!! Bernadette hasn't given up! What I thought was her giving up was her simply going back and rethinking things. Clearly, Bernadette has more spunk than I originally thought! ...

    Jan 1, 2025
  • Novel / Chapter » Chickens, Fantasy Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Three, The Fowl Witch

    DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN. Little did Henrietta know but her alliance with the chicken lady would align her with witchy forces! Though, I'm not sure this is going to make her ...

    Dec 31, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Realistic, Mystery / Suspense Re: I Knew Chapter 1

    Hi Kaia! It's the Infamous "I Knew"! I've been meaning to get to this forever, but for whatever reason I never did. Strange, I know. Anyway, seeing as I love ...

    Dec 31, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delirium - Chapter 2

    Ah, finally! I get to chapter 2. :D Okay, so some thoughts! (Possibly controversial thoughts??? OH DEAR.) I feel like nobody's mentioned the elephant in the room?? You go through ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Horror, Mystery / Suspense Re: Delirium - Chapter 1

    Okay! I am probably missing something big here but... I don't understand why Lydia considered to be a lunatic? The detective says that he thinks that she was intended to ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Other » Mystery / Suspense, Other Re: Delirium (The Prelude)

    Ooooooo, a teaser! I am torn. On one hand, it's kind of cool graphic and font and everything. On the other hand, it's really hard to read! I can barely ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 2

    JARID MADE IT TO THE TEMPLE, YAYYYYYYY! Okay! Some more thoughts! >> Scorch??? There seems to be some backstory that I am unaware of. >.> I think it would be ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Action / Adventure, Fantasy Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 1

    LOL! I had a FEELING that Smolder might have a new sibling that he didn't know about, hahaha. I feel slightly vindicated now that the chapter is over! :D Anyway! ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Chickens, Fantasy Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Two, Legal Eagle and her Hen Defendant

    Waaaaaait. What? I am so confused right now. XD Chickens have lawyers? That are happy to vouch for them, but not speak their language? And we're now in a fantasy ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Novel / Chapter » Chickens, Fantasy Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter One, Snake in the Henhouse

    OH NO!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT NO WHY DID YOU DO THAT HENRIETTA??? Okay!!! Some thoughts! -> Why would a farmer have only five chickens? It seems odd. Like, perhaps I'm a bit ...

    Dec 29, 2024
  • Poetry » General, General Re: black irises

    Hello Ley! Just a couple of quick thoughts! ^^ they are the absence of light’s need to exist I admit... the possessive apostrophe on light kind of threw me off ...

    Oct 28, 2024
  • Short Story » Lyrical, Supernatural Re: DRAFT: children's picture book

    Hi! Okay... I am going to be honest. I have no idea what age this book is intended for. I have six children, ages 1-10, and I can tell you ...

    Oct 28, 2024
  • Short Story » Horror, Horror Re: The Salesman and The Crockpot

    OH NO OH NO OH NO OH NO THIS WAS SO MUCH WORSE THAN I THOUGHT IT WOULD BE. LIKE. I knew this was horror going in! I knew something ...

    Oct 17, 2024
  • Short Story » Mystery / Suspense, General Re: Receive a letter

    OH. OH. The creepy letters are about MURDER!!!!! So Mr. Hauker... aka Ballrog, aka the Hawk, was being targeted and Zephir is the wren and Arella is the... lizard? Also, ...

    Oct 14, 2024


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