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Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Six, Water Off a Duck's Back
OH NO. CLAUDE WHAT ARE YOU DOING???? Actually, I am kind of frustrated with everyone, hahahaha. Eveyone's gone insaaaane. Like, Claude didn't destroy the basilisk egg... which given that she ...
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Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Five, Ruffling Feathers
Hi Horisun! :D Okay... let's go into it, shall we?? revenant expression I... am not actually sure if I like that adjective? It's a bit of a twenty-dollar word. I ...
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Re: User Manual for The Perfect Woman
Hi Elektra! Okay, this is going to be a ridiculously dumb review, but having read too many SOPs and user manuals in my life... it isn't clear who the user ...
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Re: Delirium - Chapter 3
Mwhahaha! First! :D *gnaws on story* I liked Lydia's musing about whether she should join dinner or not. So, from this section, it's clear that she doesn't think she's mad... ...
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Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Four, Flying the Coop
BUT WAIT!!!!! Bernadette hasn't given up! What I thought was her giving up was her simply going back and rethinking things. Clearly, Bernadette has more spunk than I originally thought! ...
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Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Three, The Fowl Witch
DUN DUN DUNNNNNNN. Little did Henrietta know but her alliance with the chicken lady would align her with witchy forces! Though, I'm not sure this is going to make her ...
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Re: I Knew Chapter 1
Hi Kaia! It's the Infamous "I Knew"! I've been meaning to get to this forever, but for whatever reason I never did. Strange, I know. Anyway, seeing as I love ...
Dec 31, 2024 -
Re: Delirium - Chapter 2
Ah, finally! I get to chapter 2. :D Okay, so some thoughts! (Possibly controversial thoughts??? OH DEAR.) I feel like nobody's mentioned the elephant in the room?? You go through ...
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Re: Delirium - Chapter 1
Okay! I am probably missing something big here but... I don't understand why Lydia considered to be a lunatic? The detective says that he thinks that she was intended to ...
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Re: Delirium (The Prelude)
Ooooooo, a teaser! I am torn. On one hand, it's kind of cool graphic and font and everything. On the other hand, it's really hard to read! I can barely ...
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Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 2
JARID MADE IT TO THE TEMPLE, YAYYYYYYY! Okay! Some more thoughts! >> Scorch??? There seems to be some backstory that I am unaware of. >.> I think it would be ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: Shadow's Rising {Wing 5} Chapter 1
LOL! I had a FEELING that Smolder might have a new sibling that he didn't know about, hahaha. I feel slightly vindicated now that the chapter is over! :D Anyway! ...
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Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter Two, Legal Eagle and her Hen Defendant
Waaaaaait. What? I am so confused right now. XD Chickens have lawyers? That are happy to vouch for them, but not speak their language? And we're now in a fantasy ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: A Chicken on Trial: Chapter One, Snake in the Henhouse
OH NO!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT NO WHY DID YOU DO THAT HENRIETTA??? Okay!!! Some thoughts! -> Why would a farmer have only five chickens? It seems odd. Like, perhaps I'm a bit ...
Dec 29, 2024 -
Re: black irises
Hello Ley! Just a couple of quick thoughts! ^^ they are the absence of light’s need to exist I admit... the possessive apostrophe on light kind of threw me off ...
Oct 28, 2024
