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Oh, this is poignant. I love the whole idea of darkness, especially since death is involved here. It makes it really dark and creepy and mysterious. I like it! All ...

Hello again, Isaac! :) All right, I'll be honest here... this poem seems a little bit confusing. You keep on talking about "acceptance" but then the question springs up... acceptance ...

Hi Hamingway! :) By the way... your username is awesome! Hmm... your poem is interesting. You're using the idea of insanity and everything to make it sound like some sort ...

Eek, alcohol abuse. :( I don't know if you are writing this to show your mother, or if you are simply creating a scenario. I hope it's the latter, but ...

Hi Spark! It was really sweet of you to write on such a beautiful topic. :) This probably sounds really geeky, but this totally reminded me of the Dr. Who ...

Haha, this is neat! I think it actually belongs better in Narrative Poetry, because it deals with a story, but that's just my thoughts. If you want, you can always ...

Hi Isaac! Okay, so this is pretty interesting! Just a couple of things... first of all, sometimes you capitalize "Me" and "My" and varients of this and sometimes you don't ...

Hey Amber! :) Okay, so, this is going to be mostly a content review... I hope you don't mind! :) And... um... I like to overthink things. Sorry in advance! ...

Hey Chibi! :) I think, for this particular piece, you don't have enough descriptive imagery. I mean, this is so short that you need to bring out all the descriptive ...

Hey Justis! :) So, a poem about mothers! They can be quite a pain at times. Anyway! I think that if you were more specific about what actually happened, there ...

Hey Em! :D For this poem, you stress the idea of having a planet to each other. However, you repeat this a little too much to the point that I ...

Oooh, I liked this! :) When I first read this through, I have to admit that the concept kind of reminded me of Ecclesiastes, because you have this whole concept ...

YAY! WRITING! Not a bodice-ripper but... uh... we'll save that in our get-rich scheme, eh? ;) So! This piece! This piece is very, very different than the other pieces that ...

Haha... I have been corrupted by Homer and Hesiod . Anyway, I will try to bite my tongue on certain issues. Still, I will remark that Thetis is a very ...

I hope this is not based on a true story! That would be terrible! In any case... have you read the poem "Daddy" by Sylvia Plath? (You can read it ...