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One of the most curious lines for me was this one: "As she closes her fist around something hard-" And, this is going to seem a little strange, but it ...

Hey Lavvie! So, this is a very casual poem. Cool beans! Anyway... the main question here is why do you vow never to be with this person? The things that ...

Hey piegirl! :D So, it looks like you have a pretty cool work here! I mean, you have the king being insane, you have a bunch of battles... this looks ...

Hi Rika! :) Okay, so! For me, this sounds like you are arguing an argument that doesn't really exist, if that makes sense. That is, typically the argument for euthanasia ...

Haha... yeeeeah. XD The only thing that kind of bugs me is the "two seconds" line because obviously you don't take a nap for two seconds and she went to ...

Hey ninjas! Just a couple of things... Obviosuly, you are a good writer who knows how to take a simple story and to make something out of it. Tara, poor ...

So, I'm guessing it's about these goddesses (or succubuses) who can destroy people too? It certainly seems like that. Anyway, I am not quite sure of what kinds of thoughts ...

Oy, I hate it when animals die. :( Though! I am glad it was only a dream! I have to agree with Lavvie here... the stanza did seem a little ...

Ack, we can be our worst enemies, can't we? As far as this goes... I think it might be better if you added some external conflict to this poem! Right ...

Hi! I think I am probably missing something critical here.. Azalea, after all, is an Indian and she seems to understand the sentiments and enjoy them where I (an American) ...

That video is neat. ^^;; Anyway, when I was watching the video, I noticed two things that I wanted to bring up. :) My emotions sway over the ocean. And ...

Hey NaRachel! :) Okay! Your poem was a really neat poem. But I must admit that it confused me a little! The two parts of your poem seem weirdly separated ...

I really liked the opening lines! It's very catchy and I love the imagery of poets running out of words, especially since the image is so contradictory. Poets are not ...

Yay! I am glad that you get to stay with your best friend. :) This is so sweet because it puts a conflict at the forefront... you moving out. So, ...

Hi ajt! :) I kind of like the format here, where you have him looking at Mimi and thinking about what's going on in her head versus what's going on ...