Snoink

Hello Penguin! :D This is going to be a shortish critique because I'm tired. :P The thing that I noticed about this work was the slow pace. It took several ...

Hello drama queen! :D Okay, first of all, I like to do video critiques. It's generally easier for me, which is really awesome because I have no time for writing ...

Hey Spike! :D I've been doing video critiques a lot lately, especially for poetry because it's a really cool way to see how your poem sounds to the other person. ...

Gadi.! We did a video critique of this poem, we being Sgt Salt and me, Snoink. First we read it out loud (which is a scary in itself) and then ...

Sorry for this late review! My brother, Griffinkeeper, and I did a video critique for you. That is, first we read the poem out loud, then we commented on it. ...

Hello Arashi! Sorry this critique is so late. I kept meaning to post it, but I kept on getting distracted, I guess. :) Anyway, my brother, Griffinkeeper, and I did ...

Hi and welcome to YWS! :D I like debating and I really love debaters who have strong arguments, so I'm just going to be a devil's advocate and go through ...

Okay, so this piece is kind of yucky for several different reasons. Right now, it looks like you're going through the metaphor stage-- that is, if it ain't a metaphor, ...

Hello and welcome to YWS! As you can probably see, we have some really harsh critiquers, but not all of us are that way, so don't panic yet. It's going ...

Titorelli! :D Okay, so the video finally loaded up, so hopefully it'll help! Mainly, I go over the main points, and fortunately for you, the critique is fairly shortish! Good? ...

Hello! I think I've seen you around YWS, but I think this may be my first critique for you, so hopefully you'll find it constructive and everything! :D As always, ...

Hello lakegirls! :D I made a video critique for you... basically, I read your poem and comment. And I talked a little bit about what the thing could be too. ...

Aww... reluctant to post this? But we love you! :D Anyway, I did a video critique of this, just because! I'm afraid I yawn four times (I guess I should ...

Okay! So first of all, I gave you a star because your awesome and your poem is actually quite exceptional. So yay! :D Next of all, I've been doing video ...

Hello! I am going to assume that this is a non-serious piece of writing--forgive me if I am wrong! :D To make this shine, you need to make this more ...