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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 5.1
Hi! I'm back! :) "So." Eniac gestured towards the book that was laid open in front of him. "This was one of the books I wrote about incompatible types errors. ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 4.2
Hi! It's review day and I am like... way behind in your story. WHOOPS. So I figured I would see how much I could catch up! :) Sunny wondered how ...
Jan 29, 2023 -
Re: The Last Spell 3.2
...hi again! Cyrin looked up from their work, squinting at her. “Sorry that I can’t look like a fairy from a children’s storybook,” they said, tipping their head to indicate ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: The Last Spell 3.1
...okay. Back to the heist. YESSSSSS. She had a connection to magic that no Minor Mage could ever dream of having, but this she was jealous of. OH. DO TELL. ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: The Last Spell 2.2
Okay, I know last review I said that I was going to bed, but... well... I lied. Sorry. Another incoherent review for you! The mayor pulled out a different paper ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: The Last Spell 2.1
WAIT. NO. YOU CAN'T JUST STOP WHEN CYRIN AND MIREYA ARE-- Okay, okay... we'll see what these characters are doing. BUT YOU BETTER FINISH THAT OTHER PART, YA HEAR ME????? ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: The Last Spell 1.2
HI. It's me again. Your favorite incoherent reviewer, here for another incoherent review! *waves* Every so often, another Bane or two would drift out of the walls, but it would ...
Dec 18, 2022 -
Re: The Last Spell 1.1
Hi! @Shady made your story sound intriguing, so I figured I would take a look. ^_^ I am horribly ill right now, so I am afraid this will be a ...
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Re: Happy 18th Birthday YWS
YWS thanks you for the Or maybe I just thank you? Until I figure that out, I just want to say... As soon as I Read this, I thought it ...
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Re: I Don't Know // Prologue Kinda Thing
Okay! So... um... I have five kids (the youngest one is nine months old) so I am just going to bug you on developmental stuff. XD Her grandmother showered her ...
Oct 28, 2022 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 4.1
Robert glanced at the manual Sunny was holding. "Hum. Perhaps the paragraph on incompatible types slipped out when you weren't looking. Weren't you listening earlier? Error descriptions have been esca
Oct 26, 2022 -
Re: a too-hot shower
Ooooooh. I do like this. Though, I disagree that a too-hot shower can exist, lol. (Bring on the heat!) I also like the stylized cursor at the very end because ...
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Re: Hellscape/Garden of Eden
As somebody who grew up in California and then lived in Washington for about ten years, I love this poem. Because when the smoke rolls in like that and makes ...
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Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 3.2
Sunny tried to read the reference manuals. She really did! But despite her best efforts, she started nodding off somewhere around booleans and eventually fell asleep on a page about ...
Oct 25, 2022 -
Re: Sunny and the Syntax Errors of Doom: Chapter 3.1
Professor Polymorphism placed the map on the table and held down the corners with some books. Sunny grinned and immediately leaned over the table, eyes wide and trying to absorb ...
Oct 25, 2022
