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Hi again! Okay, so Caleb is gearing to be my favorite character so far, lol. Val might think he is an idiot, but like... really, he is the best. He ...

Hiiiiiii again! I did promise I would leave a slightly better review on chapter 1, didn't I? XD Okay, so I totally stalked your Camp Nano thread and I really ...

Hiiiiiiiiii! Okay, so first I read the first chapter first (I didn't realize that there was a prologue at first, whoops!) and then I went back, realized that there was ...

Okay but... goofiness is a nice quality occasionally, but rarely we want to be thought of as merely goofy. We want to be thought of as greater than a clown. ...

THE LAST CHAPTER PART. (Before book 2, anyway...) Sunny made a face, but waved goodbye to Robert. She turned to Jasper and said, "I hope you enjoy your adventures here. ...

Sunny frowned. "But… Okay, fine, I know that expecting things to be perfect forever is unreasonable. But I need a happy ending to my quest, at least!" She needs to ...

With Jasper helping, the process of debugging Jessica went much faster, and Sunny's hopes started to rise. If this was a sign of character growth for Jasper, then maybe once ...

Is it review day??? I suppose this means that it's time for me to review!!! Slowly, Jasper's ambassador formed shapes on its front that resolved into a slightly-pixelated face. The ...

Hi! My favorite stanza is the first stanza by far. It admits that romantic love can be wild and sometimes flowing, and the desire to just hold onto the moment ...

Haha, oof, the hidden messages behind this one! Though, I have to say how sarcastic and biting it is. My one question is... this line: You’d never hurt me (You ...

Okay, so for an introduction for your novel, I would make it fairly standard for an introduction. So basically... I would rewrite it completely to follow this format... 1. First ...

WAIT. THEY DIDN'T ATTACK THE MENACING FIGURE?? ...I am admittedly disappointed by this, haha. (He was right there, gahhhh!!) I also wish you had described him leaving, since that seems ...

Hello! I am back for more... who is going to steal Cheyenne's magic??? WE SHALL FIND OUT THIS MYSTERY SOON!!!! She started walking towards the door very quickly, and said: ...

Okay, so I haven't read Accidental Magic! BUT. I saw this chapter sitting idly and figured I would read this! :) She got angry, and well- Boom. The guilty one ...

Hi Summer! :) This is definitely some new imagery that I've encountered! Bubblegum is so sticky and makes it harder to speak. Plus, if you swallow it wrong, it can ...