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Thanks for he review! I never really did think of Johnny and being tired and all that - I'll be sure to add some more stuff in when I edit. ...

Yeah - no problem! Sometimes when I copy and paste from anything other than Word, it'll mess up. No worries! ;) :D

I'm still unsure of it myself. Well, this is the only male I think I've written that's remotely close to Maggie's age, so... (: (: (: (: And don't feel ...

I see what you mean about the overall characters - I'll probably go back (or forward) and add in a few things about my characters' physical traits... I'll try and ...

YOU MONSTER. Okay, despite how emotional I am right now, I'll try to give you a decent review. ;-; "Megan, if you go back in there, you're going to freeze. ...

Bold: [b] [/b.] (without the period) Italics: [i] [/i.] (without the period) Thanks, and no problem! ;) :D

Yeah, I see what you mean about having so many characters now... Eh, now that I think about it, I don't know how you would re-introduce them... The only one ...

No, it's fine. ;) I was having a "bad review" day yesterday as well. But yeah - I know it's kind of bad - but I'm still kind of trying ...

*IS READY* :D

Yes - Caroline was actually the original name for my MC, and I had written about 3 chapters before I changed it to Maggie. :D I'll fix that right away. ...

It's totally fine! ;) (And sorry - I just saw your reply to MeandBook's review.)

:D I know what you mean about the length of chapters - it happens to the best of us. ;) No problem! :D

I will admit, Martin is kind of shady. But you're right - in a couple of chapters, a lot of stuff will be revealed. :D I didn't notice that about ...

That makes sense - I'll try and add a little more about Martin before-hand. About Martin showing it to Maggie... Er, let's just say it'll be explained in the chapters ...

Yeah, I believe the "closest" it's going to start getting everyone "out of the dark" is the end of chapter 3. :) But a lot of everything is explained in ...