Snazzy

Hi! First off, AMEN! :D All of this is true, and more. You really had a great idea, and executed it nicely. Anyway, time for the review! And for nine ...

I really owe you like, a million reviews, Skins. Seriously. I hope I can be half as helpful as you are in your reviews. Someone tugged me backwards... Was that ...

YOU MONSTER. Okay, despite how emotional I am right now, I'll try to give you a decent review. ;-; "Megan, if you go back in there, you're going to freeze. ...

Hi felistia! Good imagery in this one, though a bit overdone at times. ;) Anyway, on with the review! Only, how would Hisster react when Zoltar challenged him? WHOA- why ...

Hi MyersTylerT! :D First off, I must say I enjoy this poem (or whatever you intended it to be). It's short, yet gives us an entire story to think about. ...

Sup. :D Alright, so I like the idea in this - and the teenagers attitude's somewhat. :) Anyway, on with the review! :D Now that we know more about what's ...

Hello! This is a nice chapter, and I'm not sure why no one else has reviewed it yet! This is fabulous, really, and I'm sorry that it took you this ...

Howdy! :D EMILY.

Hello. :D Alright, so I don't really like the typical teenager (even though I am a teenager myself), but you did an okay job describing some girls today. There weren't ...

OH MY SNAZZY'S ACTUALLY REVIEWING. So since I learned the code for the moving text thing, I'll be using it a lot. ;) :D Anyway, “I have something important to ...

Greetings! First off, welcome to YWS! I hope you really enjoy it here! This is a really interesting story idea, one that's "not-quite-like-the-rest". I like that. ;) Now, time for ...

Hello! I don't believe in perfection. Everything can always get better. That being said, this was pretty close to it. ;) The rhymes really enhanced the whole thing, and all ...

Sup. Alrighty! So this review, like Cello's, is going to be a little short - as your poem is short. ;) But I'll do my best with it. You don't ...

Hello! So this is pretty good - only a few things I thought to mention (besides like one or two grammar mistakes). Anyway, time for the review: Alrighty - so ...

Hello, Falconer! Alright. So I've just now noticed something about your chapters: they're mostly dialogue. Your dialogue is fabulous, believe me, but I think you should add more "action", or ...