Snazzy

This is a beautiful poem, and you did a great job of describing life. I only have one little nitpick. "Like most people, I had a dream, A pure dream, ...

Hello! I really loved this poem! I am always open to realistic ones, they are just so....realistic. XD Sorry I couldn't give you any advice... It is a really good ...

Hey! Really, I thought this was actually a pretty good start to a book, I am really interested to see what happens next. I did sort of get a little ...

Wow. This......was........HILARIOUS!!!!!!!! I loved this so much, so much that I just want to go outside and scream this poem till I have not another breath inside of me!! It ...

Hey! Are you sure you wrote this in 5th grade!!!(I believe you, it's just that it is such a good poem!XD) I love this. Really Imaginative! I only have one ...

First off, let me just say that this poem is beautifully written, just amazing. I like how you throw in some rhymes here and there, normally I would think that ...

Hey emeraldfox! Okay, personally, I love historical fiction, whether it be poetry, or stories. I like how you did it about Dolley Madison, instead of someone like; Abraham Lincoln or ...

Hey Kim! Ok, so I just read the first chapter, and now I am on the second. WOW. Most stories I don't do that with, so yours is special! So ...

Hey Kim! First of all.... OH....MY......GOSH. The suspense you left at the end of the story was amazing! It's also pretty realistic that the kidnapper wears gloves! Normally when you ...

Hey CuriosityCat! First of all, I just want to make it clear that this story is really truly amazingly written!!! I loved reading it! Though I do believe you could ...