Snazzy

Hello! :D Me being a music-lover and band geek, I really like your first paragraph. ;) You used really good figurative language, and really drew me in to the chapter. ...

Hello Felistia! :D Good detailed chapter! I like the new dragon, Emerald, that you introduced! I hope she continues to be in your novel! Now, for the review! :D the ...

Hello! :D This is a really good chapter! I like how you advance the plot, instead of just holding forever on details or certain events (I have a problem with ...

Hello! :D I bet you can already tell what I'm going to say. ;) Beautiful imagery in this poem - you really made me "see" the storm. :D Now for ...

Hello! :D Another fantastic chapter! Description here is good, and not over-done in any part! The ending sentence wrapped it up quite nicely. ;) Now, for the review! :D It ...

Hello! :D Sorry this is so late. I've been drowned in school, reviews, and NaNo. xD But finally, I'm here! “Michael VeLasio,” Dr. Chester responded. “Have a seat.” Is he ...

Hi! :D Another job well done! I love how you write about seasons and nature - and this one isn't "scary", but "chilling" - and I like it. (if that ...

Hello! :D Great poem! I really liked the way you end it - with the ship still there where it belongs. ;) Now, on with the review! :D The untamed ...

Hello! :D Great imagery on this one! I think your poems express your 'imagery' skill the most. :D I haven't said this before on any other reviews, but just because ...

Hello! :) Once again, another great chapter! You kept me on the edge of my seat all throughout the 'fighting scene', and I liked how you describe all the creatures ...

Hello! :D This is a good chapter! Your description is consistent, maybe a bit overdone at times, but I still like it. :) Now - on with the review! why ...

Hello! :D Once again, another great chapter! :D The details were great, especially about the storm! :) Now, on with the review! :D raging storm. top of the storm. I ...

Hello! :D WOW. SHABAM . That was the sound of you blowing my mind. :D This is an emotional piece, and I love it! Now on with the review! Bam, ...

Hello! :) This is a very emotional piece! The last line certainly ties it all up - good job with that! :) Now - on with the review!! :D That ...

Hello! :D I love repetition in poems, it really emphasizes your point! :D Now...on with the review! Talk to me Are you scared, frightened Talk to me It’ll all be ...