Snazzy

Natquin, Welcome to YWS and thanks for sharing this piece! My name's Snazzy and I'm here to give you a review that will hopefully help with your writings in the ...

Good evening! I always hate criticizing works like these because they're personal. And they're mostly written out of need for an outlet. A need to get things that have been ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! I haven't read any previous chapters, but I found several grammar errors throughout and I'll try to give you some feedback on that and ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :) I haven’t read any other chapters, but I’ll do my best in giving you a great review! The first thing that throws me ...

Hello! Snazzy back for another review! I love the child-like creepiness you were able to get in your characterization of Crystal! It wasn’t forced, but it was very evident in ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! I haven’t read any of your previous chapters, but I’ll give this a go! I actually like the chapter title. I think it’s very ...

Hello! I haven’t read any of your other chapters, but I will do my best to give you a great review! Since scribbleinks already did a great job giving specific ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! I haven’t read any previous chapter parts, so I apologize in advance for any confusion in my review following. I’ll do my best to ...

Hello! :3 Snazzy here for a review! One thing I wanted to point it out because it repeats quite often, was this line - You say you have it but ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! :) Alright, so from what I know of suicide is that it works in different ways. So I’m not going to talk about how ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! Welcome to YWS! :) If you have any questions feel free to ask me! This poem to me gives off two very different feels, ...

Hello! Snazzy here for a review! While I don’t know everything you’re going through, I think writing is definitely a great way to cope. Overall this is a really strong ...

Hello, and welcome to YWS! :) This story, although short, really packs a punch! I have a couple of suggestions, however, that might make it even more powerful. I feel ...

Hello! First of all, welcome to YWS, and thanks so much for sharing your work! :) I can't wait to give you my feedback on your first chapter! Setting : ...

Hello, Cinderquill! Welcome to YWS! :D I hope you enjoy it here on YWS - if you have any questions, feel free to ask me! Anyway, let's go on and ...