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This was a beautiful piece of poetry you've written. :) And I especially loved the title! My Ghost and I . So poetic in itself. I think my favorite part ...

First off, I just wanted to point out how funny I think it is that guys seem to always comment on other guy work. Even though it's just completely irrelevant ...

First off, I'd like to say that I really admired the layout of your poem. It was very appealing to the eye. And although I don't prefer a small font, ...

I think overall you did a great job on this poem here :) The words sounded beautiful the way you put them together. It had a simplistic flow in quality ...

Hi tinkembell, I'm here to write a quick review on this. :) I have to say, the title itself interested me a lot. Mostly because I am a fan of ...

Fantastic job with this poem. I really loved how you left it on a clinger at the end. You don't tell what happens, if the speaker falls or makes it. ...

I really loved this poem a lot. It had so many beautiful aspects to it. You have a nice way with words. I found it difficult to pick a favorite ...

This was very funny. That fact that it was so short but still had so much to offer was what I feel made it such a delight to read. I ...

Hello :) I read your poem, and I think you did a great job overall. Although something with the rhyme scheme seemed a tad off to me. I can't quite ...

This was perhaps one of the most random yet interestingly funny things I've read so far. The creativity itself was astounding. :) Who the heck would think to right about ...

This was sweet and simple. Short and to the point. The title of your work is very befitting of what you wrote here. Something about reading this was just so ...

I feel almost speechless... This was absolutely pure, romantic art. :) Although, I kind of do find myself agreeing with the reviewer above me. It was a little gory, but ...

I loved this! This was my kind of love poetry . It was sweet and charming, and although you made the comments insinuating sex, I feel it only made it ...

I absolutely love the way you end your chapters. It always seems empowering just to read. Great closers make for great final impressions. I love the impression you have given ...

This was a very well written first draft of chapter 1. Hardly any flaws to your writing. It was clear and interesting, and I especially love how you seem to ...