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This was so clever and funny. I loved it. My favorite parts on Death's list were 5, 4, and 1. :P Made me laugh. I love when writers hold that ...

I feel like I'm missing out. I couldn't download the attatchment. Safari wouldn't let me :(... Oh well. I'm sure it was great Kafka. :) I can assume by your ...

You seem to be quite popular on the featured works section. :D I can see why. This was great. I especially loved how you ended it. That's always a good ...

Hi Gracie :) Nice poem. Overall, I love the idea behind it. I sort of agree with Kafka though. Something wasn't right with the rhyme scheme. I didn't really notice ...

This was kind of cool to read. I liked it. It seemed very brief though, so I'm sorry if my review doesn't really help any. Just wanted to say great ...

These stories tend to be the hardest to put out there I notice. They also tend to be the toughest to word right. :\ I think Sargsauce already put a ...

I wasn't really quite sure what to make of this really. It seemed a little odd. Because Joe and Nick are brothers. And why would they be bisexual? I couldn't ...

Aww! It's over ;( You must make a second book off this. I swear, you'll be my favorite junior writer of all time. I can't believe you made Ismael's wedding ...

Wonderful job with this, really. It was so simple and sweet. So simple that it made a whole lot of sense, but still wasn't in the least bit boring. I ...

Awesome addition! Both of the Federal brothers having a baby. I love it! I love how you left this on a clinger, too. I'm sad that it's all going to ...

Your title drew me in. Excuse me for being drawn to the sappy love poems ;) I thought this was pretty sweetly written. Although, I can't help but feel that ...

Hello KT :) Here to lend a quick review. Or maybe not so quick?.. Here we go! ... H ave you ever just stared at the phone, hoping that it ...

Beautiful.. This was just as incredible as the last story of yours that I read. Only, it was just so different, all I could keep thinking about was, "Whoa, this ...

Fantastic work here, CS. This was a very great addition to your story, the whole past thing. I think you really took it to the next level with your characters. ...

I'm speechless on how utterly cool this was to read. I don't think I know of anyone else who could create such a unique style poem. The imagery you portray ...