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Hey there, Mazer. Here to review this for you ;) Promise to keep it to the point, and painless as possible. (kidding) Okay, so first off, you said this was ...

This is one of those pieces that I read and have to reread until I realize there was nothing I could really think of to critique or pick at. x) ...

Personally, I found myself agreeing with both Ty and Shear. I wasn't quite sure what to make of my view on it my first read through. I suppose a lot ...

Hey there. Here as requested. I guess I'll just jump right into the nitpicks and such. ;) He heard a ticking (;) a ticking of a grandfather clock. The cracked ...

Here as requested, Jas. :) I saw a girl die yesterday. She was weeping tears of blood (.) H er skin, washed-out and pale as I dug the blade into ...

So, I'm back as requested. And I have to say, I was quite pleased reading, but of course there were some things I must point out before going into a ...

Hey Rains.. This was really awesome. :) Read it all the way through without any disappointement. I think parts could be fixed as far as grammar and things go, but ...

I liked this a lot. A striking thought ;) And with a bunch of really great points thrown into it. A few nitpicks though: Newly married, married for year (s) ...

At first when I started reading this, I was starting to feel like it wasn't much of a review. The whole first paragraph seemed like a little synopsis of what ...

Hey there.. Just a couple things. Swallows sang their joyful song. (Joyful has only one "l".) and I figured it wouldn't hurt to intrude a bit. (Won't should have been ...

Wow. . You nailed this. I loved it. It really started to tug at my emotions in all the right ways as I was nearing the end of it. You ...

Overall, your poem was nice. I tend to use repetition myself with certain poems, so I'd be a bit of a hypocrite if I chose to make a comment on ...

Hey Gracie.. I don't think I've read any of your work in awhile. I shall review this for you. :) I'll start with edits. Written feverishly on (an) exercise book ...

This was pretty nicely written. I'm a little impressed. Although, I did spot quite a number of mistakes throughout reading. I'll point them out for you real quick. and his ...

Hey, Jas. Here for that review of yours. Personally, when I read this it seemed a little scattered. I had to read it over a second time to grasp it. ...