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I have to say, Azila's review was mighty intimidating when I first saw it. I hope my review doesn't seem so feeble looking posted beneath it. D: I can say ...

Hi there (: So, my opinion of this poem was that it had a nice dark vibe to it, but it kept its poetic beat. One thing I did notice ...

Hey there, Hayden. Here to review this interesting little short story you wrote. ;) You know, sometimes I find myself tongue tied when I read something as descriptive as this ...

Hey there, Lilac. :] Well, I just wanted to say that this seemed slightly unfinished to me, I think. There wasn't enough that was really interesting so much as it ...

Hey there paperbackheart. This was a pretty simple poem in my opinion. Maybe even a little too simple to lend any real constructive criticism, seeing as there's not much to ...

Hey there, BT. This was overall a very cleanly written piece, but before getting into my actual review I figured I'd point out the little nitpicks that I spotted first. ...

There's really a lot I can say that I appreciated about this piece. First off though, and most obviously, this was extremely well written. And I mean in more ways ...

So, there were a few things that didn't quite sit right with me with this story. I read Gryph's review though as well, and I have to say, she makes ...

Hey there. ^-^ So this was a pretty cool short story. You seemed to be very creative in the way you put everything into perspective. There was such a great ...

Hey there, Greg. (: Here to review this for you, since I've already liked it. x) I'll begin with the small things I wish to pick out. Comments, suggestions, etc. ...

Hey, Tell. A few things here. Edits are in red , comments in blue . These eyes don (') t judge. They only try to discover What you are or ...

Hey there, Jas. This was a pretty different kind of poem. Not sure I've ever read anything really like it. There was something about it that seemed a little scattered ...

Hey, Yanni (: A few things. Then that cold day in December When you drew the line I think this would sound a lot more appropriate if you made it, ...

Hello there. Here to lend my version of a review for this. ^-^ Seeing as a few have already commented. The first thing I would like to comment on though ...

This was awesome, mostly because I rarely read anything very funny posted on here. And I very much like to get my occasional, humorous read on. ;) Your title itself ...