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  • Other » General, General Re: Letter to My Mother

    I'm sort of a fan of when writers decide to be brave enough to take a more personal approach to their writing. Often times it cleanses out their thoughts and ...

    Jul 14, 2011
  • Short Story » Action / Adventure, General Re: Time Tunnel

    So, I'm sad to say that because this is so short, I don't have as much to say as per my usual reviewing standards. D: Perhaps this was placed in ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: A collection of senryu

    Karzkin, this is really quite brilliant. :lol: I loved it, and I'm not even all that caught up on the gist of the difference between Haiku and Senryu. I think ...

    Jul 5, 2011
  • Poetry » Narrative, General Re: Your Brother...

    I saw the title and guessed right. ^-^ This was exactly an 'I'm in love with your brother' poem. I have to say, you picked a fresh subject to write ...

    Jul 4, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: Nevermind them, Us.

    Well overall, I think this may have had its potential, but it's far too in the stages of a first draft for me to clearly make out any solid potential ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: Tend your Flame!

    Hey, Temi. Well I have to say, a lot of your lines were quite original. It makes it for interesting poetry. One thing I didn't so much like though was ...

    Jul 2, 2011
  • Short Story » Science Fiction, General Re: Quantum Chronometric Tunneling and Purple Socks

    Ohhh. . . Now I get it. Thanks for the spoiler, Snoink. Now. Onto my impression of this scientifical little story you have here! I enjoyed how even though I ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Short Story » Fanfiction, General Re: The Boy in the Striped Pyjamas

    Hey, Rabbit! Wow, I must say it was your title that pulled me in. I've never read the book, but I've seen the movie and absolutely fell in love with ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Poetry » Dramatic, General Re: A bandits fortune

    Hey, Rocksmith. Let's see, overall. . really beautiful poem. And I mean beautiful. ^-^ You had such a wonderful way of articulating yourself and allowing the words to just fall ...

    Jun 30, 2011
  • Short Story » General, General Re: American Cynic

    It's funny how normally lazy I am to read or review anything too long, unless it's requested. I read this and I'm hooked the entire way through. :o I think ...

    Jun 29, 2011
  • Other » General, General Re: I can't

    Hey there. So, in general, I found your solid point a tad refreshing. It's not every day when someone decides to bring up a point in the bible to something ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Losing Love

    Okay. . this was truly a little heartbreaking. At first I was a little worried you wouldn't pull through with the proper emotion. At first it seemed a little "done-before" ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Short Story » Romantic, General Re: Collecting Hearts

    This had so many clean angles to it, I have to say that overall it was very nicely articulated. Your writing style seemed very spacy and unnecessarily lengthened, but by ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Poetry » Other, General Re: Untitled

    Okay, so I haven't really reviewed much poetry in awhile, so I hope this seems adequate enough. :lol: I really liked how in the beginning this seemed like it could ...

    Jun 26, 2011
  • Lyrics » General, General Re: Have You Lost Me

    This is really sick, Raz. ^-^ Do you sing or play guitar aside from writing song lyrics? Just curious. Yeah, I don't really review lyrics too often, but since this ...

    Jun 26, 2011


You can, you should, and if you’re brave enough to start, you will.
— Stephen King