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Hmm.. Well, it seems I may be at a short loss of words, as this is a pretty short poem. But I will say this, it was very nicely said. ...

Hey there, Shadowknight. Wow, this really is quite interesting. Mostly because I don't think I've ever seen anyone create a map of their setting in a story. It's really quite ...

Hey there, Boolovesyou. :D First off, as I normally like to start my reviews off, I just want to say that I really did like this. I think that what ...

Now this ... was pretty great. :mrgreen: Firstly, I just want to say that I enjoyed the way you smoothly unraveled the mind of a guy who was so conflicted ...

D'aww. D: What a sad poem! I don't know why I tend to like reading stuff like this. I guess it's because I like to see writers show understanding for ...

Hey, Gossipgirl! Smylin' here, ready to review what you have of this short story of yours. :mrgreen: I'll try my best to be clear and not so all over the ...

Hi! So, this seemed to be very nice and clearly written. There were no real mistake that I could think of to point out to you, so thumbs up on ...

Hey there. So I have a couple things I guess that I wanted to point out with this. First of all, it was a nice short story. I think after ...

Ah, finally... * makes it rain with virtual cookies* ...Now I feel I can give a proper review seeing as I'm all caught up. I have to say after reading ...

I'm almost caught up! Just wanted to make a brief comment though about Aaron Carter's name. x) Every time you mentioned the name I got a mental image of this: ...

Hey there, HenPen. Here to lend a review for your poem here. :mrgreen: I have to say I rather liked it, which for some reason only leads me to praise ...

It seems you've achieved so much great feedback from this post already, so I'll probably end up making this review short and an over excessive swoon about how absolutely beautiful ...

Yuss... ;) Caught up to part 5. Where are my cookies!! Well, I figured I've read enough to at least offer my thoughts on the story up to this point. ...

Hey, Arisu. :D I don't normally do my reviews this way, but for now it seems like the easiest way in order to go trough everything thoroughly. Hope you don't ...

You posted something! Yay! Okay though, onto business. *evil smirk* I've never reviewed a friends work on this site before, so I will be exceptionally awesome at it I hope. ...