Smexaykk01

DAAAAYYYUMMM Bindy!!!!! You made me feel Like I was right there in the story! feeling all the emotions! you are **{SUCH}** a talented writer!!!!!!!! I LOVED IT!!!!! great ending with ...

I couldn’t help but grin. ‘Ah well, I’m just a vampire with my sexy vampire boyfriend. No wonder the wasp got scared.’ Are they not married? I like this a ...

WOW! You are really talented! But, you really need to work on your punctuation here. This was really sweet and it made me smile a lot! It even got me ...

Gee, Olli this is great! So awesome and like you! But you always use swear words in your stories and stuff. (especially bull shit) So try not to or use ...

I like this, its a really perfect start! It left me with questions in my head and I really want them answered! I would like to see this story carried ...

Nice! I like it Olli! So awesome! And totally you! But what the meaning of this? You need to at least put in a line on why you wrote this. ...

The sky is alight. Blazing. The blue of it is almost gone; replaced with pink and orange. My eyes reflect the colour, every shining detail of them. "Irey, get down ...

Gee, you almost have me in tears here! Its so emotional. But you are giving to much info dumps... You are describing things that aren't necessary... But I still find ...

How dare he I thought to myself. Should be: How dare he, I thought to myself. Other than that it was good, very awesome. But in other ways it is ...

This is very creative is so many ways, The way you talk about God and Angels mocking us is very moving, maybe they do y'know... Do the angels above weep? ...

Its good! I like what you talk about and stuff, its pretty cool. But what are you talking about? Like angels or something or is that just me being blonde... ...

I don't really like this one, I'm sorry. It has no detail to it and it did not give me that feeling that things like these are supposed to give ...

I like Kayla a lot! She is so normal and not like the other girls most people think of at that age and stuff... You're a really great writer! keep ...

Smexx is here to review! First of all, I love the name choice! Especially because my name is Kayla too! This story is a typical everyday neighbourhood deal, but you ...

:lol: I like it! Very fun and artistic! You're very good at this! I give you: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: :elephant: 10/10 for Aw