SkyeDreamer

I, too, liked the abstractness and the imagery of this. Some people would find it confusing, but when they look deeper, they would understand it just fine. Did that make ...

Yay, you entered my contest! You always write the most unique things, so I'm really glad right now... Anyway, time for my full review. My comments will be in blue, ...

Here reviewing for the contest! First thing's first: Don't get discouraged by the criticism. Every poet makes mistakes, even the "greats," so don't feel hopeless. I'll do the full review ...

Here to review, as promised! You used good imagery in this poem. Okay, here I go- my comments will be blue. Glittering like a sapphire in the lap of rolling ...

Hey, Cammie! Here to review for the contest... This was really good. You made the flow work well and the wording was very good. You’ve got to be kidding me. ...

Well, I think Glimmerglass really summed most of it up, but since you submitted it to my contest, I'm still going to review ('cause I want to :p). Sorry if ...

I liked this; it almost seemed metaphoric to me. Okay, here we go for the full review! My comments will be blue. On the edge of time The world fell ...

This was really good! It had feeling and the word choices were nice. Well, now for the full review. As always, my comments will be in blue. :) I can ...

Alright, here to review for the contest! I did like this, but some parts didn't flow right. Still, a nice poem. Alright, here we go; my comments will be blue! ...

I really liked this poem! Alright, my comments will be blue. He was my Idol And everything I wished to be. Through thick and thin, He was there. To me, ...

Creepy, but very good! I liked the casual attitude of this, as if the person had been through the process a billion times. Here we go- my comments will be ...

This is a cute poem! It's short and sweet, so it may be hard to do a full review, but I promised one and I'm going to give one! My ...

Hey, Cammie! Here to review, as promised. I really liked this. It was different than most poetry I've read; it was lighthearted for the most part, but also had sort ...

You submitted this to my contest. All the other poems have been given a full review, with me quoting the poem and giving thoughts by stanza, but this poem doesn't ...

This flowed well, the rhymes were good and unforced, and you made bats seem... enrapturing. So, my comments will be blue. Creature of darkness and terror of night, Who dances ...