SkyeDreamer

I loved everything about this. Unlike a fellow reviewer, I really enjoyed the title, I just wanted to throw that out before getting too far into this. It's just a ...

I love this. There's a simplicity of it, although I'm not sure simplicity is the word I'm looking for, that makes its impact greater than it would be if you'd ...

I love, love, love this. Such strong imagery, and while the organization of all the water metaphors don't necessarily line up, I think that's okay. It still flows well. Honestly, ...

This is beautiful. So, so good. It's mysterious and leaves the reader with a lot of questions, without a completely clear picture of the what or why; that is not ...

Nicely done! Good job with attempting to explain what's going through a teenager and how it affects their life. You cover many different aspects of the topic, and your conclusion ...

This was beautiful. I love how it was obviously flowing with information only you and him would understand, and yet still amazing for an outside reader, too. I love the ...

Oh. My. GOSH. UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE! PLEASE! EEP! There were some minor grammar errors that I spotted, but you can always go back and edit those later- not a problem. ...

Umm. Okay. Where do I begin with this? First of all, I'm sorry you had to go through whatever this is based on, because it sounds like it was a ...

I really liked this! As a Christian, I could really relate to everything you were saying. I loved how it made sense while not saying outright, "You need to follow ...

Okay, wow. I could feel the emotion reading this, feel how much you love Lilly and how much it hurts you to see her like this. As for the poem ...

Hi there!! First of all, I really liked this poem! It had such a great meaning, and I love the way you compared nature and whatnot. It was an interesting ...

This was a very powerful poem; it held my attention all the way through. However, as much as I enjoyed this, I have a few critiques. I have a simple ...

Wow. Wow, wow, wow. I don't know how to review this without cheapening its value, honestly; this was so beyond wonderful. You just packed all the emotion you could've into ...

D4D4D4 Just wanted to say, I LOVE this poem. It's not cliche, but still easier to understand than some really overdone stuff. (Does that make sense? Please disregard anything nonsensical ...

This was a really good start to the novel. There are lots of parts I could pick out that I liked a lot, but that list could go on for ...