Skydreamer

Thank you. I was going for a more simple approach and was really doing this to get back to writing again. I need some practice for sure but I do ...

I'm sorry for the tone. I didn't mean it to come out like that. I was expecting criticism, but I took it too hard. Obviously I made a fool of ...

I appreciate your comment! And I will make it in poetry form, but I must say I was contemplating the idea of just leaving it like that because, these rules ...

By the way... if you've read this, this is not a fanfiction, that was an accident...not sure how to fix it though. :/ if I could have some help that'd ...

Hiya! :D Awww...this is absolutely adorwable! :3 I agree with the other reviewers that "mine" does not need to be capitalized...and neither does "everything". Oh, and I wonder, who's gonna ...

Stella! :) I do need to fix that part... but I was mainly trying to show a society that doesn't really care/see what is going on around them. Also many ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...

Thanks so much! I know, grammar and silly punctuation mistakes are my issues. I need to work on that. And I guess you're right about the ending :P. All your ...