Skydreamer

You mean her? :P Thanks! I really didn't want to continue on too much, because I felt that I wanted my short story to be short (not that it has ...

Thank you! I was trying to describe a menacing person someone who is a bully.

yay! Bacon. ^.^ thank you! And you were right, the 'crash' was metaphorical, and in the exact way you described it to be, at least when I wrote it, but ...

So...I'll PM you the questions. :P But my comments, thank you for your advice of the "blisters" and "bleeding" I re-read it and I realized that you were right! It ...

It was inspired by a book called "The Scarlet Letter". Thanks!

So can I! :P

I wasn't sure what to do with this piece. When I feel compelled to write something, like a short story it often ends up like poetry, but when I put ...

Thank you!

That you did. :)

I wanted to leave a lot of room open for imagination. Thank you!

I just read some comments, you wrote this? It's still beautiful, and I know there are people out there like the girl and the father.

That is so special. This shows that children really do understand what their parents go through, and her especially! She's a sweet girl and has a great dad. So grateful ...

Thanks :) You'll be one of the first to hear the completed thing, if everything works out!

Thank you! Yeah, I completely get what you mean. I was also thinking though of a sort of modern folk, like with a slight (scottish) accent or something :P. Very ...

Thank you so much! :) I hope a singer/artist could really sing it. I made some changes, but Eyes have wrinkled from times of the past means, because of the ...