Skydreamer

One more comment though, I understand they aren't on the same 'scale' (beauty and danger, purity and sin) but they aren't meant to be. The beauty and danger is something ...

I like how everyone interprets poetry in their own way, and I'm glad you liked it! I probably will edit it and change it for artistic appeal, but you are ...

*curtsies* thank you wise Poet Knight. xD for reals though, thanks.

*Whispers* You should get this published. (If you haven't already) Really good essay!

This is a work of brilliant art. : )

holy......goodness... lol

why'd you take this off? :O

As for the fourth of July thing though, I'm not American, and that would be kind of cliche. : )

Thanks for the review!! : ) I get a little nervous when I record sometimes. I tried to be emotional though and it's sad that it didn't come through. I'll ...

>.> "All lines in poetry are to be capitalized and none of yours were" no. Poetry is free from grammar rules. Poetry is a flow of thoughts, people put restrictions ...

YAAAS. The world needed to see this.

but you have to capitalize all the first letter of the first word in the poem. Because that's what poem should be like.

Don't forget capital letters.

This is really beautiful. one note: you don't want these words to fly—in silence , let them quiver, in silence I suggest you add a comma there. That was also ...