Skydreamer

Hey, me here for that review!! :D First Stanza I liked the terms you used. In fact that's the reason why I continued reading! I liked how it was just ...

So this review is going to be pretty short, because I've seen that you've already got some pretty excellent reviews on it! What I really liked about it was the ...

So, I am going to attempt to review this. I say attempt because I don't really think I can review it to the extent I would truly like to, but ...

So, me here for the review! :) First of all, I don't really mind the way you formatted it, I think it's fine, but sometimes your periods got too close ...

Can I just say I love this? :D So I'm going to review it to express my love! I go from stanza to stanza! First Stanza: An everlasting journey that ...

First and foremost: I am pretty sure you copied and pasted this and it ended up like that, haha :P. But with that said, I still think that you should ...

Hey! It's me, and I just got reminded of you and went to your profile and got reminded of your request! :P So with all that reminding I am now ...

Heyyy! This is really, really fun and interesting! I like how you worded it, I liked the terms you used, and found that the flow was good. I would suggest ...

Hey! I'mma gonna review this! :D This is really good! I like the flow in it, it's steady almost like the waves of the sea. Normally I go from stanza ...

Hey! I'm going to reveiw this!! And I go from stanza to stanza and usually end with an overall message. Changes will be bold. (And this is going to be ...

Hey! I'm going to review-w-w this :D I go from stanza to stanza with an overview. I love this. I don't know if you've read Kate Chopin's The Awakening ? ...

Hey Demora! So, you said I can re-review and here I am. It's still as good as it was when I first looked it over. The problem is the formattign ...

So normaly my dear Dreamz I go from stanza to stanza. I am going to do that here. (By the way this reads well! :D) The Start: Would I ever ...

First of all Dreamz, this has potential but I think that you are saying Stranger way too much. I'm for the moment going to try to rearrange this so that ...

Wow. I am speechless. That was beautiful. But, that said the formating kind of threw me off a bit. And I think that periods help the flow of a poem. ...