SkyJayde

If you remember your suggestion of having Rei set Arson's house on fire then, I'm just gonna say it's looking like that's what Rei is going to do. I won't ...

Heyo. I'm going to review your piece. Before I begin: This is a piece of art. It's filled with emotions and it flows together easily. Guiding the reader along as ...

Thanks for the feedback! I will add some more context when I get the chance, also to clear up any other confusion check out these chapters: It might help clear ...

Thanks for the feedback! I will fix those few mistakes and add a rating when I get the chance!

Thanks for the feedback and pointing that out! I will revise it and edit it when I get a chance!

*Ignore this comment. Accidentally hint “submit” instead of “Edit Work”*

You%u2019ll know pretty soon (when I post the third or fourth chapter.)

Sounds like someone has a little love-hate relationship with Doma. Although he would be so proud to hear someone speaking of him in a somewhat good way. The similarities I ...

Hehe I%u2019m not telling you if there%u2019s a connection >:D

Noooo there is no connection%u2026possibly%uD83D%uDE05 I will add those missing words as soon as I can! As I%u2019ve said before, my brain works faster than my hands so I appreciate ...

I%u2019m glad you liked! I think pretty soon I%u2019ll get into how he acts when committing crimes but no promises.

I might take that idea into consideration! Thanks for the suggestion!

I%u2019m going to post more once I get home!

Glad you like it! I%u2019ll put a note above the first chapter so people read the prologue first. Thanks for the feedback btw!

He was a sweet person but he did have some major anger issues. So he reacted out of anger a lot, which is the primary emotion behind him killing people.