SirenCymbaline

I knew it was gonna happen eventually...nice job.

I prefer quality over quantity to be honest, and this is a helpful review. :) And real life always comes first.

I like the rhyme of 'sass' and 'glass'. It's an odd rhyme that other people may not use, it's interesting. (By the way, in New Zealand we pronouce sass with ...

Looks like we have a diamond in the rough. :D The metaphors are good and strong. I'll probably never know what you meant them to mean because I don't personally ...

I like this very much. It's a seemlingly useless statement, I know. But when a heartgut thought is put into words, it rarely means almost as much of anything. I ...

That's pretty good, and nicely symbolic. (Also, it's spelt 'penentrate.')

Oh and I forgot to say the ending was perfect. It was ended at just the right time, just the right way. After revealing the disgusting truth, you show them ...

Ah! there is a little 'holier than thou'. Darnit. Thanks for pointing it out!

I can't say I understand the hidden meanings which you so artfully hid for one in turn, artful enough to find them. And maybe one day, someone will. StoryWeaver, you ...

I've reviewed with depth before, but for something as beautiful as this, I only have a smile and a compliment. I cannot find anything better to say, really. :)

OMG I LOVE YOU < 3

XD

OK, it's too complicated to fix. Sorry.

Edit's back! I'll fix it.....eventually

The structure (and other stuff) REALLY needs editing, but there's no 'Edit' option, so ignore any mistakes that are not related to the actual words, OK? Thanks.