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Re: The Tragedy of My Legs
Hey thanks for the review! (and sorry for the late reply.) Your comments were nice and specific, I found them really helpful. The drama and serious-not serious tone was my ...
Mar 9, 2020 -
Re: Alas, Poor Carter
THANK YOU for your love, I love you too, and thank you for the hip review
Jan 22, 2020 -
Re: Tic-Talk: A discussion on the stigma and stereotypes behind Tourettes Syndrome
I'mma start by disclosing that I am not knowledgeable about Tourette's. As your essay is aimed at people who aren't already knowledgeable, I hope my impressions will be helpful. I'm ...
Jan 7, 2019 -
Re: Alvarado Pt.2
Yee, it musta been hard to cut out all the extra stuff you liked, so my commendations there. It's prolly for the best that Moctezuma got cut out- and I ...
Dec 31, 2018 -
Re: Chasing Shadows - Prologue
Nice! I'll keep an eye out.
Oct 17, 2018 -
Re: this dream I had about Obama once: featuring Obama
Hey, thanks a lot for that review. Gave me a lot more insight on what I, uh, wrote. At first it was just a cute nonsense poem I wrote to ...
Sep 26, 2018 -
Re: Seven Year Small Town Blues
I am curious to know what gives off the impression of thriller intertwined with insanity. It's an interesting, not necessarily deliberate feeling, so I'd be very grateful if you could ...
Sep 9, 2018 -
Re: Chapter 2.4
' the King, who was now hurriedly preparing to enter the courtyard, and his family.' *Cough.* You might wanna rephrase that.
Jul 12, 2018 -
Re: Ramla Final
Oops, you were spelling it as Hugues the whole time and I've just been misreading it as Hughes. That's a little embarrassing. Yeah, there probably wasn't anything you could have ...
Jul 7, 2018 -
Re: Ramla Pt.4
Oh, there was something else I like that I forgot to mention. The scene where King Baudouin stabs his Arab attendant. This story has been really heavy on the Christian-positive ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Ramla Pt.4
The perspective confusion was in the conversation between Estienne and Salvio, and when the perspective shifts from Estienne to Conrad so you can describe what Conrad is thinking after Estienne ...
Jul 2, 2018 -
Re: Ramla Pt.3
Aaah. For some reason I briefly realised that Hughes wasn't gonna be hanged with them, and then for a reason I forget I got confused and thought that wasn't the ...
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Lovely Metaphors
I love it so much tho....
Jul 1, 2018 -
Re: Her Name Was Leelah
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Dec 30, 2017
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Re: Her Name Was Leelah
I really can't see any way this could have been changed to work better for me, so I'll just try to break down why it worked. Man that ending was ...
Dec 30, 2017