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Re: The Nymph
where is the poem???!! I really want to read it!!!
Mar 25, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(4)[death]
Yay!!!!! I love your stories!!! Sorry I was a little late w/ the reply. I couldnt find this story anywhere!! Finally I looked in your profile. I nothing more to ...
Mar 24, 2010 -
Re: After Adonis
ok, but its romantic fiction not fanfic because its not copying Percy Jackson.
Mar 23, 2010 -
Re: Ink
Sorry if I was too harsh...I expected something more... Anyway there is a children's book about a little kid who finds a magic marker....Thanks for accepting my criticism like a ...
Mar 16, 2010 -
Re: Oblivion's Circus--prologue
Nice story. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Summer Camp - Chapter 1
Hey leeannerz! I love your story! It's interesting how she's only a number. I know you wroter this in the bottom, but I WOULD like to know where we are ...
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: First Friend
That was beautiful! I like how you put the subject of the paragraph in between the 2 lines! I can't wait to see other s of your wok!
Mar 11, 2010 -
Re: Dark Odyssey
Om my God!!!!!!! So thrilling! So many questions unanswered! I love these type of stories! You are a real master of story telling.
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Message in a Bottle(edited)
This poem is so thoughtfull and emotionall! It would have been nice if you rhymed, but I love it w/o the rhyming! :smt003
Mar 10, 2010 -
Re: Light by Night(0,1)
Amazing story! You really have a knack for writing! You should publish a book.
Mar 9, 2010 -
Re: On Barbed Wings
Interesting post! I want to see what happens next! I think you should have put this in fantasy or romantic fiction. But keep on writng!
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Blue
Great story!! Though I know someone with a name SO close to yours! It's called Shades Of Violet. It would be respectfull if you changed your name.
Mar 8, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(3)[pawn]
OMG!!! I can't wait to read more!
Mar 6, 2010 -
Re: Secret Desires
So passionate! I love ur poem.
Mar 5, 2010 -
Re: the keeper
Hey, great story! U need some commas though. In the sentence "now girls... you have to capitalize now and have a comma after girls... U have a few gramaticl errors, ...
Mar 5, 2010