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Re: 5 reasons why these kind of people are better.
Soo your answer is to be smug and stick your nose up to people who decide to debate and try to understand other opinions that might not be readily available ...
Dec 27, 2010 -
Re: Letting Go and Remembering
Dear Gadi, this is an exceptinal piece and I am sorry for your loss. This story has an altogether ethreal yet down to earth feel to it. In the beginning, ...
Dec 26, 2010 -
Re: Math
I love this! First poem you say? This is the best first poem EVER! I love how ADDED in the emotiones of the the narrator as well as the math ...
Dec 24, 2010 -
Re: Bored....No Joke
Bahha!!! Excellent writing and rhyming! The day is long I'm getting bored I wanna sleep five hours more : this is the best rhyming to me and fluency of the ...
Dec 15, 2010 -
Re: I l-o-v-e y-o-u {EDITED}
Oh my gosh that was just so amazing a beautiful! The way you wrote in their history while they were having a simple, but deep, chat. And how Ella couldn't ...
Oct 21, 2010 -
Re: Anna and Ryan- their story
awwwwww! So romantic!
Sep 2, 2010 -
Re: Hard Breakup
WOW!! This is a very beautiful, realistic, rhyming poem!! I love the lines, though some of them didnt rhyme that well. Nice thoughts and conversation. You made it so that ...
Aug 19, 2010 -
Re: Daddy
Wow. Very interesting!!! I liked how you made me feel like I was scared. But with these emotions, I got from it that he was a girl and it came ...
Aug 9, 2010 -
Re: Look Into My Eyes
Hey Val !!! Oh my gosh this is MAGNIFICENT!!!! :D I really caught the emotion and I loved the similes/metaphors... All I'm here for is 1) to praise it and ...
Jul 30, 2010 -
Re: Shades of Violet(6)[king]
wow!!!!! The adventure never ends!!!! :) This is amazing work and still a mystery... as you might know, It's perfect to keep the reader guessing.... AND I AM!!!!!! You just ...
Jul 29, 2010 -
Re: Lost
Hey SpyOh!!!! :smt024 My corrections will be in Red My likes in Purple My dislikes in Green Lost lost between her arms lost in her eyes i feel..... lost when ...
Jul 28, 2010 -
Re: The Love for the Lost
I don't remember the last time I saw you But I remember how I felt And I remember how you smelt I remember every touch And oh, how I loved ...
Jul 26, 2010 -
Re: a description of space and love
JAGGED!!!!!! :P I CANT BELIEVE YOUR HERE!!!! :D REMEMBER ME?? Anyway, My corrections will be in red, my likes in purple my dislikes in green and my comments in pink! ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: I Still Want You
"HELLOOOO LAS VEGAS!!!! Darlin, Darling, You were wonderful, epic, amazing! Here's my card." As the agent inside of me said, IT WAS AMAZING!! Very random and cool and super funny!!! ...
Jul 25, 2010 -
Re: Whispered Strength Chapter 2
Hello again Adeera!!!! As you know, My comments in Pink My likes in Purple My dislikes in Green My corrections in Red CHAPTER 2 W hen the horses where in ...
Jul 22, 2010