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No worries. Ah that makes sense, I thought it might've been that. I apologise for being such a confusable person :P Be sure to let me know when the next ...

No worries! Ugh don't worry, same. You don't need to throw in a load of deep, enormous descriptions, even just some more basic narrative to create more of a feel ...

No worries, glad I could be of help :3

Thanks so much, Iggy! I'm uber-glad you liked this new and improved second chapter :3

No problem, glad I could be of help! Haha yeah, that's fair enough! I've rewritten novels (or tried to anyway) many, many times. Just practice as much as you can ...

Ah okay, I understand Saraan now. What I will still say though is that while obviously you clarifying it in this reply, you need to explain this stuff int he ...

That's great! Obviously with cer being there for more or less everything, seeing things from cer perspective will be interesting. Just be sure to differentiate cer and make cer stand ...

Glad I could be of help! I'll hopefully be able to get to the whole chapter some time tomorrow :P

Ah okay, well it'll be interesting to see the difference :)

I get'cha! Hey, if these descriptions are what keeps you writing fiction then I say go for it! It's not a big issue for me at the moment anyway, just ...

Yeah, that's fair enough. It was only a suggestion anywho, and I'm sure I'll get used to the pronouns before long! Thanks for clearing up some details on this fantasy ...

Thanks Noelle! :3 I'm glad you could remember the first chapter from way back when you read it, I'm sure that's a good sign, haha. I did sort of want ...

Hahaha, soon! I already have the next two written up, see.

Ohhhhhh, I get it. Maybe note that, that the place closes at three to be extra safe. Ah I see, I live in a small town and no one will ...

Oh yeah, I just read it back now, and I now see that she's a wind tamer! That's okay then, so long as her puking is explained because it did ...