Sins

I loved this! Your poem had great rhythm and I could follow it easily and understnad what you were trying to say the whole way through it! I'm probably just ...

I really liked that! It was a really sweet poem and I love your writing style. I like the opening paragraph because it shows how you started off not minding ...

I really liked this I feel like I'm involved in the story and I really do like your main character. Most people have pointed out the less positive things about ...

I really liked this I really do like your main character. This is a very entertaining story. It is very hard to write from the point of view of someone ...

I really liked this I feel like I'm involved in the story and I really do like your main character. I did notice though that there were a few letters ...

I really like this! The flow in it is very good. I like many parts of the poem but I would probably have to say that my favourite part is ...

I really like this! The flow in it is very good. I like many parts of the poem but I would probably have to say that my least favourite part ...

I really like this! The flow in it is very good. I like many parts of the poem but I would probably have to say that my favourite part is ...

This is very good! I especially love the first stanza because the way you describe it creates perfect images inside my head and you descriptions are extremely good as well. ...

This was great! I love how your pom starts off with a sombre mood but then towards the end of the poem the mood changes and ends up lighter at ...

I really enjoyed that :) It sends a good message and it's a very clever and very interesting poem to read. I especially like your writing style. I also like ...

Hey :D That was beautiful! I ecspecially like the lines Love is the tender war that leaves a blissful mess; The more you give away the more you possess... Those ...

Wow, this is a lovely not disgusting story at all! :P I thought it was great! Once I started reading it I had to read more! I can't think of ...

That was really good. I understand how you're feeling and your message is very clear. I know that love hurts but you've just got to move on and try and ...

This is great! You have a very good writing style and the story is very well written. When I started reading it I couldn't stop! It was so creepy it ...