I really enjoyed that
It sends a good message and it's a very clever and very interesting poem to read. I especially like your writing style.
I also like it becasue it wasn't another depressing poem and it was something that made me feel nice when I read it. (I know I'm weird) It made me feel very hopefull and positive. Well done!
I would agree with some of the people that you could have used different words in some places but except for that I can't see any obvious faults in it.
Overall it was a very well written poem and I can't wait to read some more of your work!
Keep writing
Meg x-x
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